Talk:Arthur Gaz/@comment-32222412-20181014014542

Can't say I was fond of the ending here. In the first place, the very idea this story was based upon was something I disliked, not that I didn't enjoy the story itself, I just hated some parts of the setting. Like there being many different chaika, "our" chaika just doesn't feel special when she's just one of many. The explanation of brainwashing and whatever were just boring, so were the resurrection method. I also dislike the idea of a character losing all her/his memories at the end or at any time without gaining them back. What's the point then? She can't even remember what they went through. Urgh, that sucks.

Seems one of the easiest things for authors is to botch up endings.